didnt make much sense to me
but it was still kind of intresting at the same time. it had so-so animations but crappy music so i guess it was alright
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efproductions responds:
It doesn't make much sense to me, either, man. This was done a long time ago on a program called SWiSHmax, which is a shitty program to begin with. Shitty program => shitty results.
Interesting
So this guy that looks like I-Ninja kills some random guy for smoking? Needs more plot, unless this is just some Predator thing....Good song though
I'll help you out.
This review will help you so much, so read it if you want to improve.
I'm not a big famous animator on Newgrounds, yet. But remember my name and you'll be glad you've recieved this review. I understand you're new, and I know that you're angry at the bad reviews you've been getting. But, those reviews are great learning tools. If you study the criticisms of the viewers, you'll know what to do next. If they say something isn't good, then improve it on your next movie. I think that there are three general problems with this film: 1. It's the most common type of flash movie on Newgrounds. You see it all the time. There is one dark character that kicks someone's ass. WE've all seen it. Make viewers think, "I wish I thought of that!". 2. You should get sounds from a website called findsounds dot com (You're unable to say an internet adress in a review normally). Search whatever sounds you want, and import them into your movie. It'll make the movie feel alive. 3. Patience is very important. Take your time to make a movie. Personally, I've redone my current project, Arc Warfare, 7 times! Redo until you say, "It's perfect.". Because, if you wait long enough, you'll be able to read a review with someone saying that you're a genious. Well, that's the general help I'll give you. I hope to see a great movie from you, because I see that you have hidden potential for style in specific. Good luck as an animator. - Tin Cetic
efproductions responds:
Very good suggestions, maybe I have been looking at all this the wrong way..
Thanks for the review.
you still need some work...
Compress your sound next time and work on your drawing. You seem to atleast have the patience to make flash.
that was bad
u need a plot and it was boring u need some work
efproductions responds:
well,well,well.. A bad review from somebody who can't even make flash himself, or if he can, he doesnt have the balls to upload it to a major, and world-wide flash database such as Newgrounds.
I've said it before, and I'll say it again. THERE IS A PLOT, AND IT WILL BE REVIELED IN NUMBER FOUR.