Pretty good
Some people on Newgrounds who choose to review movies and games just have no talent for reviewing.. they apply only their opinion, which is not an educated one since they probably havent been through film school or worked with any professionals in the past. and most likely - with the attitudes they have- wont.
This was actually a pretty good story, I liked how it ended it all makes sense in the end. I believe negative reviewers felt uncomfortable with the thinking process and decided to vote poorly.
Good work, keep it up.. and try to work on Scaling.