Not good enough
Look, believe it or not, the artwork was terrible. It seemed every new frame Link's face was inverted, and it just looked very strange. BUT before you upgrade the artwork, PLEASE FIX THE FUCKING SOUND!! It has a shitload of feedback and was overly static.
On the good side, its humor was decent, but easily improvable.
Yeah I know everyting is mega easy to improve, especially like people as you right? A day in modern life has better sound, but the incredible animation is err..ahum, yes..
awsome
i always saw link as a heroe not a s moron :P
i loved it ... greate plot, greate animatin, hell greate everithing .... (wink)
keep up the excellent work
eh, okay thanks!
Art needs lots of work-good effort and persistance
Since you seem like the person who actually wants critiques here's my two cents.
When people say your art needs work, it means that you need to focus on making your characters more believable. By believable, I mean that the characters seem like they can actually exist in that world. Try to keep their volumes from warping constantly. A great reference for you to learn from is the "Animator's Survival Kit" by Richard Williams. Almost all animators worth their salt own this book as well as any beginners. The effort put into this animation shows to me that you're serious about trying to learn how to animate. Start taking life drawing, etc. Another book I'd recommend to learn how to "see" when drawing is "Drawing on the Right side of the Brain" These are two no-bullshit books that will improve your abilities by teaching you the basics of art and animation. Good luck.
Eh,characters look more believeble? they are cartoons you know, the have oversized hands feet and head for a reason..Bu if indeed you also menat believeble for a character, i have a couple drawing learn books here,including a manga one , so i guess i will take a look again, thanks..
Omg lol
This was so stupid it was funny. Keep up the great work.
eh..I´l take that as a complimen..Thanks :)
That was very good
Nice animation, and I like the different use of his weaponry. The sound went off a little towards to the end, but that's okay. Overall, a keeper.
okay, thanks for the review!