Awesome guitar work
I really liked the guitar playing in this song, they could stand to be a bit louder and the sound quality needs to be improved, but it was played well. There was lots of variation in the song and I really enjoyed listening to it, and, not to beat a dead horse, but if it is in your power to do so, find a vocalist and some lyrics, this song would be absolutely amazing if it had vocals. Keep at it!
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Cobbler, stick to thy last.
Nah, just kidding. The guitar playing isn't that bad, only the sound quality could be a bit better. It just sounds too muffled.
The intro is very good, the riff here is pretty much kick ass! After that the song loses a bit of that "kick ass"-ness, but it's still decent.
The major drawback may be that there are no vocals in the track, but it feels as if there should be some... there are some parts of the song where I just wait for the singer to start singing.
Overall, it's a good song, but it needs vocals!
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I like.
Although the quality wasn't top notch the actual guitar playing was to quite a high standard. The intro was good with the toned down kind of sound. I like all the different sections to this, it all kind of fitted together nicely. Good percussion aswell. Keep up the good work.
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Sirtom93.
Just like you said.
Just like you said in your author comments it was just a bit sloppy and the quality wasn't the best either. It has that effect of you kind of just throwing it together if you know what I mean. Not the best, but I don't think you really "sucked" at the guitar or drums at all. Some of this did sound really good, but it just sounded like some of it didn't fit with the other parts. Anyway, just tidy it up a little bit and if at all possible get rid of the sloppy effect that you have created here. The part that you added at 1:40 (I think that is the right time) was a pretty awesome part though.
C52
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thank you corky.
i really should get this back into logic studios and fix it up somewhat. Being that im kinda lazy when it comes to this song is a prob though. Alot of the part just seem to jump into eachother with a bad mix.
i have been getting pretty good reviews which i am surprised about.
thanks for the comments ... ill be using them when i remake this song.. which might take a lil bit of time.
Pretty good.
I like the guitar tone.
I felt like your drums fell a little far into the background, mix-wise.
Some of your transitions feel pretty abrupt.
yeah this track was just a bunch of guitar lines that i recorded and edited together and had no idea what to do with so i made a song.
i might redo this one with better drums and polish up the guitar tracks as well.
maybe even change the structure of the song.
thank for the review