Interesting loop
So i came onto this and i was expecting something differant from the title alone but you have gone over the edge with this one and im pretty impressed with what you do have here. So I thought this one was a tad better then the first one, it has some more detail and depth to it, i like the deep sounds to it, this has some quality to it, allthough this does have a loop feel and icould see it more then just a loop like a tune of sorts, but anyways it was notbad i liked it. So i will make this ending kind of short and fast, but not before i say that it was a real pleasure with this track here, but you do have some good stuff here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now while this is something good and something decent, itcould use some extra work and more time spent on this would prove to show some results. So you could make this better and more then just a loop, adding more sounds, more variaty, and more depth to it, just more into a tun, a song that will generally make a much more quality entry for you and the listeners.