Not bad.
It's a newgrounds flash movie alright...violent and gory.But you must create better stories! I'm expecting a better story next time. And the graphics need polishing.
Reviews for "Hot Dog Stand #5"
OK
Ok whatever, learn to seperate your layers.
ok
It moved along so slowly I couldn't even finish it. I like Your style of humor alot though.
HILARIOUS...but only for a minute
Dude, you completely pulled me in with that abusive father on the telephone (where the hell did a telephone come from at a hot dog stand lol). But after the bottle ordeal (which i never really saw too well) the movie moved so slow and had little worth that i become completely uninterested
Eugh...
Don't think it deserves the mark it's got.
Best thing you got there was your voice acting, congrats to whoever did that, although, even at points it sounded as if the voice actor wanted to laugh rather than read his lines.
The drawings were ok...using two different tools to draw your backgrounds/foregrounds with never works well. Use one tool and stick with it..
It looked as if you only used 1 layer...? Learn the ins and outs of flash properly, you'd be suprised how much it helps. Somtimes you had bits of arms, or bits of the phone left stuck to your characters head, or that counter. It looked scrappy and unclean.
Animation wise, it was fairly poor. That bar just suddenly appeared on the screen. The tweens used weren't used as effectively as they could have been.
Also, holding one frame and having a minute or so speech gets dull. You could have at least had some side screen veiw of what was going on over the other end of the phone.
That all said and done, the only reason this got a high mark was because people automatically voted high on it because they saw it was part of a series and that all the other submissions passed judgement.
Some bits were ok, some bits needed seriously working on...keep going, and good luck with future projects.