Nice
Liked the overall composing of the song. The music box was put to very nice use, as was the piano (which is often overlooked). The only thing I didn't like was the sound of a few of the synths because they sounded, well, like synths, not the real thing. Overall though, it was great!
Thank you for the comments, sadly I am poor. I cannot afford better sound fonts so if you could direct me to some better sound fonts that are FREE I will gladly use them in my next piece.
Sweet
My favorite part is between 2:46 and 5:40 :) I absolutely LOVED the way you brought back the music box tune at the end, I thought that part was amazing. Personally, before 2:46, I think it was a bit undirected for my tastes, but it isn't bad by any means. Cannot stress how I loved the ending enough. Great job!