Reviews for TOG3TH3R Beginnings

[ElijahMoishe]

great first flash

that's one of the best first flashes ive seen on here great job

you already said you'd improve the voices so no need to talk to much about that

definatly more jokes i liked the ones you had in there just get a bit more in

the animation wasnt bad for a first flash im just not sure if it was them not having a neck but the shoulder looked really big compared to the head but that shouldnt be too hard to fix

any way great job and i cant wait to see what comes next in this highly creative and interesting idea

MC-Huggies responds:

Cool! That really means a lot. I have a whole whack-load of jokes to make in my next episode, so stay tuned!

[Draylorn]

..........you are a strange guy.

I watched it... and I just don't even know what to think or say about it. I didn't laugh... but I didn't hate it or really even feel any particular way about it. I did like the voices though. Um...good...job?

MC-Huggies responds:

Ok... that sounds kinda weird coming from a guy who feels no emotions... I'm just kidding. It is hard to review a movie that doesn't really make any sense, but... no laughs?...

[ChopperFather]

it was....................well um ..........fresh?

cant say to much but cool

MC-Huggies responds:

That's all I needed to hear... I think... I'll try to make more to talk about next time I guess.

[sirslut]

pretty good...

only thing is, the timing was a little off, so, just something for you to work on...anyway, he narration thing was pretty cool, and i liked how the island fell on the fisherman.thats some good shizit...

MC-Huggies responds:

Yeah, the voice synchronization was kinda crappy at parts. The screaming fisherman was one of my favourite parts to make, so ty!

[Vaslious]

It was okay

The artwork was pretty good, there just needed to be more stuff going on sometimes. The Narration wasen't good and neither was the moments where there was text over the States, (the text & States were poorly drawn).

As far as characters go, they were well drawn and had amusing facial expressions.

Overall not bad, you just need to work on the presentation a little better because the plot was lost in some places.

MC-Huggies responds:

Lol I know. I noticed that there were some boring parts with no action, so I'm gonna work on that next time. I also drew the text in the beginning when I probably shouldn't have... and detail on California could've been a lot better. Thx