What the hell are you trying to say?
I couldn't even figure out what the hell was going on in this flash. You seriously need to work on your english. And the music kept overlapping itself.
Oh, nice Tifa and Cloud edits, by the way.
Reviews for "The Return Of Cloud Ep.1"
flasheagle responds:
ok...
wow...
incredible to believe this passed judgement...i dont even know how it got to a 2 score...but we all have friends right?....anyway the music was annoying the sprites poorly traced and i don't even wanna mention the grammar...
Redo this
1) Proofread your stuff. I saw lots of grammar and spelling mistakes.
2) With alternate universe stuff like this, you should devote more time to the backstory. Let the viewer know what's going on with more than a few paragraphs. Maybe an introductory movie. All this work just goes with the territory.
3) Stay in character. If you twist your characters to the story or whatever you think sounds cool, most viewers will sense it.
It's a lot of work, but that's part of being an artist. *Smile* Keep at it.
flasheagle responds:
ok
was this meant to suck
smells like a rip off to me, that was poorly done. i hope you try a lot harder next time. this was a waste of time.
bah
Dude, thats really poor spelling in that their movie!, Do you speak English?! sorry but that was bad!
BLAM BLAM BLAM!
flasheagle responds:
nope i don't speak english but not blam...