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Reviews for "The Return Of Cloud Ep.1"

How Dare you

How dare you kill megaman especially Zero

...what the crap?

That made no sense. The music was a simple beat throughout, there was no sound, the animation was a little slow.

hahahaha

I don't laught becuase that id funny but that it is sad wor a little hareder next time.

hahaha, grammitkal errors funny are.

I liked the flash, but not alot.

Now thats out of the way, I have 2 questions , well one actually but it's a 2 parter.

1. Is english your second language?

1b. If it's not, were you making fun of the lousy port translations, much akin to the parody, "All your Bases are belong to us?" or if you havent seen that one, much like the 5 score vote that says all my 5's r belong to this.

Cause dude thats funny, and if you just speak poor english...Dude thats funny.

Unlike other cultures that get pissed at you if you miss one inflection, Americans love a mother with a poor accent and a loss of our complex language. We either find it endearing, or find a way to make fun of it, either way, it amuses us. :)

flasheagle responds:

ok..

Redo this

1) Proofread your stuff. I saw lots of grammar and spelling mistakes.
2) With alternate universe stuff like this, you should devote more time to the backstory. Let the viewer know what's going on with more than a few paragraphs. Maybe an introductory movie. All this work just goes with the territory.
3) Stay in character. If you twist your characters to the story or whatever you think sounds cool, most viewers will sense it.

It's a lot of work, but that's part of being an artist. *Smile* Keep at it.

flasheagle responds:

ok