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Reviews for "Flying Rocks"

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It's not often there's a satisfying short on NG. I found this funny in its random acts of violence. The fact that the rocks just come out of nowhere is what made me laugh out loud. I think the sound effects were spot on and the animation wasn't too shabby. The lack of holding lines made the artwork look pretty slick.

The walk cycle was off. When the left arm swings forward, the right leg is supposed to swing forward and vice versa. This had the left arm moving forward with the left leg and so on. Also, you don't need to have your copyright info up on the cartoon the whole time. It's distracting. The best place for it would be the screen where your play button is. If you feel you must have it up on the screen the whole time, place it at the bottom right of the screen where it's not such an eyesore.

Overall, I thought this was a great effort and worth watching a few times. You've got talent and a good head for comedy. Best of luck on your next project!

DemonEye responds:

Guh... i KNEW there was going to be something wrong with that.... Walking animations are REAL pain in the ass.

Nice work!

Thats really good for your 1st hand drawn movie!With a longer story,and the same art work you could be in the top 50 movies!

DemonEye responds:

seriously? wow. o_O

too short

i liked it, but it would be good to make it a bit longer or something. it just seemed too short.

add a plot, or make more happen, and make it more funnier.

the hanging off the ledge by the shoes didnt look right... but oh wel.

im glad you didnt use stick figures.

DemonEye responds:

So am I. I'm a bit too much of a perfectionist to use sticks.

This IS my first, so i'm still evolving as a flash artist... i'll improve things in other movies.

Thanks.

cool

nice movie. rather strange and a bit short, but it was pretty good animation.

For a quickie, it was good.

That could have been so much better if it was longer though! Not long enough in my opinion, but still, make something longer and the masses will come!

DemonEye responds:

I just wanted to submit a hand-drawn movie to NG, so i just whipped up this quickie. I'll make them longer, of course, now that i know i can do it.

I pulled an all-nighter on this one... o_O I didnt even notice it.