that was funny
I was worried it was going to turn into a gross-out skit at first but was plesantly surprised! Thank you,I really enjoyed that....it was worth waiting for the joke!
Reviews for "My 1st short: Cereal"
Nice work...
That was pretty funny. I never would of thought about making a flash movie about cereal, keep up the good work!
Chen-Baiwan responds:
Hey... this is what you get when you're out of ideas...
Thanks for the review.
haha
I ofund all the easter eggs withing 2 seconds
Chen-Baiwan responds:
I hope you clicked on that couch a second time.
Fart noises rule
I laughed each time the milk or whatever started coming out. Fart noises make me laugh. I love the sound when he busts out the Japan Flakes, too. So it looks like you made the guy walk backwards on purpose, but it just looks weird. Anyway, it's slow, but you've heard that too. I guess you've already got enough feedback so I won't repeat. Good effort.
Pros: novel humor, sound effects
Cons: slow, strange animation
Suggestions: Pick up the pace, maybe add a little music.
Chen-Baiwan responds:
Heh... I know the backwards walking looked wierd. Next time I won't be so lazy...
Yep... I'm gonna pick up the pace on my next short...
As for the music... well Apollopad had suggested putting in music from Psycho which he said made the movie sound funnier and more exited as well as make the character look more evil... only problem was that I had submitted this movie to Deviantart.com... and they have a strict policy towards copyrighted material in artwork. So that's why I didn't put any music of that music in.
Asians
I didnt blam you, because you were asian.... 3 outa 5. Otherwise... 0!!!!