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Reviews for "My 1st short: Cereal"

Haha...

The other day i was pouring my self some cereal, and not thinking i put orange juice in... realizing my mistake i ate it anyway because it was the last of that cereal. However i gave up 1/2 way through because Reese Peanut Butter Puffs and Orange Juice just doesnt mix for some reason haha.

Good Movie, my only recomendation is to make it a little faster, it seemed a but slow waiting for the man to walk back and forth, other then that good job for your first (good) short!

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Chen-Baiwan responds:

Woohoo! Thanks for the support!

ennh

ok well then. pretty boring. good graphics. lost my interest.

heh....

good job

Fart noises rule

I laughed each time the milk or whatever started coming out. Fart noises make me laugh. I love the sound when he busts out the Japan Flakes, too. So it looks like you made the guy walk backwards on purpose, but it just looks weird. Anyway, it's slow, but you've heard that too. I guess you've already got enough feedback so I won't repeat. Good effort.

Pros: novel humor, sound effects

Cons: slow, strange animation

Suggestions: Pick up the pace, maybe add a little music.

Chen-Baiwan responds:

Heh... I know the backwards walking looked wierd. Next time I won't be so lazy...

Yep... I'm gonna pick up the pace on my next short...

As for the music... well Apollopad had suggested putting in music from Psycho which he said made the movie sound funnier and more exited as well as make the character look more evil... only problem was that I had submitted this movie to Deviantart.com... and they have a strict policy towards copyrighted material in artwork. So that's why I didn't put any music of that music in.