needs alot of work
I liked te story line, but the sprite work is below average, it's quite simple and the backgrounds are quite bland and unattractive, Work mainly on those things...
Reviews for "SSB Adventures Ep 1"
this could be SO freaking cool
things that need improving:
-voicovers. either get some people to voiceact, or don't do anything at all. having mario and luigi say echothers names and nothing else is kind of weird.
-sprites. links sprite is always looking over his sholder when facing forward. just shift his pupils to the center of his eyes. other sprites are cool, but i think kit would help if you could get them to face other directions, but i understand that that is really dificult.
-music. just put the bgm to some old nintendo game in the background, would do wonders for the movie
overall i liked it. if your stuck for ideas, why not make the source of the evil microsoft and the x-box/sony and the ps2?
Good, but...
speed it up a bit. Other than that, quality stuff.
loll
this wud kick so much ass if u cud do better on the graphics. u like drew anything thats not the sprite itself with paint. learn photoshop man, u can do great.
lol
lol this reminds me of megaman!!