I've seen this before...
Did you resubmit this? Or... is this someone else's?
Reviews for "Super Metroid"
Quimera responds:
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Neh.
I've seen Better. Much better.
Quimera responds:
Which one? a metroid one? never, believe me, no one has a drawn one like this.
hmm
besides the menu (the beeping sound was slightly annoying), the whole movie was actually pretty good.
The individual drawings were great, but the animation was somewhat lackluster.
despite the few flaws, it was a good movie. keep makin more!
Quimera responds:
hmmm ok, keep in touch with the series
this was hard to follow
It was very difficult to watch this film because the art was a little unpolished and the scenes did not transition well from one to another. I went from watching what I think were IV tubes, to watching a burly suited man in a tank to watching a flying saucer land with nothing in between to explain what each scene was or how they were related.
For someone like me who has never played the game Metroid, this film is difficult to figure out. I felt like the bewildered man at the pictures in the Stephen Leacock story:
"Was the big man in the suit in fact inside the flying saucer? I wonder, oh yes he was - there he is getting out of it.... What are those? they look like alien crab legs scissoring very slowly back and forth....ah, I get it, it's the big man's legs...walking."
It might help if you were to create a storyboard to plan your animation so you make certain that it's clear how someone gets from point A to point B, and what, or who wwe are looking at.
Having picked this to pieces, I still think it was an ambitions and very promising animation. If you keep polishing your work, you should really go places.
Quimera responds:
thanks for the tips, ill take it on consideration.
Certain times i got a little bored
OUCH that beeping hurts in the menu.. I like the music though and the graphics were good. I really like the music! I know what its from. Its from OC...... But I really hate the fact that the beeping noice is so loud on the menu... that really hurts........ You still get my 5 though. (all my 5 R belong to this)