ok i guess
like that cam guy said more deaths and some better music for the main film. also the humor and deaths were a bit lame, i mean the skateboard thing... pretty good use of sprites tho
Reviews for "Black Mage Kills Yoshi"
meh
there are definitely a few things you can do to improve this... first off, why not make the texts automatic in the main film? its obvious that you know how... second, definitly need more death scenes, two is not enough... third, definitly try to do better out takes, most of them aren't very good (try doing something with the apples on the house). finaly, try to find some more apropriate music, such as die mutha**** by twisted.
needs some work, but it could potentialy be a great movie
This was very cute hahahah!!!
I liked this flash quiet a bit. It pained me to see yoshi dying but from the other flashes i hear yoshi is difficult to work with, oo well maybe he does deserve to die!!!
haha nice.
that was pretty funny. I really liked your choice in music....and im glad you decided to kill yoshi off! (i hate that thing). the outtakes were a nice touch too.
Um... okay...
Music-- Fitted nicely...
Black Mage's Attitude-- Not completely brought out as an evil mage with an agenda against all Yoshis...
Yoshi-- complete idiot in this one. Should at least have partial human intelligence.
Everything was alright. Except that the Stone Spell needed a bit more speed (as magic is always fast) and the dealio with Yoshi's deaths. Not very interesting in my opinion.
Work on your Flash a bit. I suggest you add like a dark atmosphere (darker background and music) in the first scene. The second, I suggest you add something dark but fitting for an assassination or something like that.