Ninja's Get the Job Done
Nice work on this. The voices are well varied and all distinct and aside from Bonzai's forced accent it's probably your best voice work so far. The old bunny's voice sometimes started to get on my nerves but every time it started to grate you got a good joke out of what he was saying so it leveled out pretty well. I'm liking this series.
KICKED ASS!
the story with the old bunny was really funny!
I 'aint no god-damned son of a bitch
After watching and reviewing your fourth episode, I took it apon myself to view the previous three installments. Though they all differ greatly in artistic design, they all have the same style. I'll hand it to you. You've got a way with words that makes the dialogue very entertaining and funny. Like I said before, the animation isn't that great, but I suppose it really doesn't have to be amazing since it's not soely an action movie.
I have two suggestions. The first is that you find a style you like and stick with it. One episode has no dialogue at all, and has a completely different opening. One is a behind the scenes episode, another is a narration for most of it. The fourth seems to be the most concrete style that actually has the ability to have continuation. However, each episode has a different opening. Maybe stick with one to make each episode seem more like a series, rather than separate movies each loosley related to the other. It's cool how you have it now, but it's rather awkward to see a different type of movie each episode. My other suggestion is to record better audio tracks. The dialogue is very good, but sounds muffled and poppy.
Keep up the good work, and I assume you've heard the Misfits song with the same title as this episode. Peace, I'm out.
Yep, I knew the music immediately. I own the casket-box set. Even saw the video of the guy punching Danzig out in the back of a concert hall. Enough ramble...
Very constructive criticism! Yes, the fourth is far more solid than the others, and is much closer to what i want the series to look like. Unfortunately, I get less lazy with each episode, and as my style grows and changes, so does the look. However, #5 and #6 are direct continuations of the current story line, and should retain the same look, so long as I don't once again get distracted by my other projects. I think I've gotten the best sound I'm ever going to get on #4. My equipment sux and being an artist and a musician should give you an inkling about my finances. Thanks for the novella! Peace.
a ninja gets the job done
That was hillarious. I totally didn't expect that the old rabbit was bonsaii bunny. Also, that is the first time that I saw a true depiction of how a ninja just does what he has to do to win.
Very good
LOL, man u have one hell of a humor