Nice sounds
~~REVIEW~~
Now this was abit hard to understand at first but as you get into it, it gets easier infact the more you {LISTEN} to it, it really gets smoother and so on, and all the sounds and sound/fx seemed so little but yet you were able to present us with a good little tune here and that was pretty neat, so props to you on the {EFFORT} in making something from so little, anyways nice job there.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now as for some sorta better outcome from this, i do like it as is. but more {SOUND/FX} can be a start maybe even some backround {ECHOING} anyways nice job.