Gorgeous
the visuals in this piece were absolutely gorgeous. They were polished, with a unique and memorable flavour of their own.
The animation was a tad ungainly. I realize that could have well been your intention, in order to underline the essential vulnerability of your little protagonist, but it could do with a little speeding up, as it started to become excruciating toward the end.
One thing that has to be fixed, however, is the audio. It drove me nuts. A lot of the Flashkit loops are very sloppy and need to be properly trimmed for looping. The best way to do that is with an audio editor like Sound Forge, which can allow you to tailor your loops for clean repeats with great precision.
However, if you haven't got access to tols like that, you can simply click on the "edit" button where you have placed the audion in your Flash movie, and then slide the rightmost bar on the envelope editor back to the left to the exact point where the audio ends, (you'll see that quite clearly when you look at the waveform).
By playing with that, you should be able to get seamless repeats on your sound loops.
