I agree with below.
Get rid of the reverb or just take it back a few notches and add those elements that come into the song later in the front of the other elements and you've got yourself a winner.
Reviews for "Black Clouds Above Me"
headbang87 responds:
yeah I'll work on this! thanks for reviewing/enjoying!
EDIT: changed the song
wow
buetifull muisc, very sad good work
-joedude156 *heavy metal is life*
headbang87 responds:
thanks for enjoying and reviewing dude, yeah the song has a sad tune
keep rockin'
hb87
Lol!
Damn, wtf... I'listened only the first 3 tracks... and... hm...
You got some potetnial buddy.
I wouldn't say it's really a sad track but a melancholic and a bit dark one... very good also... and maybe after the intro you can make the keys a bit weider maybe with piano roll playing along with the one that already exists... even the same theme but with a higher pitch, and yes maybe an stereo effect even a delay one...
Anyway it's really nice... kinda reminded me of some Nox Arcana tune and... that pizzicatos about a... samael song...
headbang87 responds:
yeah, glad you enjoyed comrade, maybe I should indeed show more variation, even if I repeat some parts, this song was made really quickly, but I don't know whether I'll work on the songs which are ready, I'm tooo laaazy :( this has always been my problem, I need inspiration, without it I'm not moving a finger :'(
It was good
it's hard to decide if this will make it into my flash but it might in a sad scene?
heck maybe!
great song, deserves to be in the first page of audio files
headbang87 responds:
Glad you enjoyed buddy!
Of course you're free to use my music for your flash, would be cool. If you decide to do this, just pm me when the animation's ready, if you decide not to use it, then I'm glad you simply enjoyed my song
thanks for reviewing hb87
Edit: oh yeah, if you want to use it, tell me, so I can give you a version with a less big filesize, also if you look for more melancholic music you should chek out my "Why Am I so Different?" and "Last message of a crying soul" submissions
MAN
id have to say this is one of my favs!!! i love classical and love the dark feeling this one gives youuu
headbang87 responds:
yeah classic and metal are much closer then the most people think, you like atmosphere don't you?