not bad
It was pretty good. I think you should stay with the no voice thing! The graphics were good I like your style that kinda 2-D look. It was a decent funny short.
Reviews for "Melon Safety"
burtonearny responds:
Thanks! I am going to use these guys again, because I like them. But I might, as I said in a previous response, give them little sounds to show talking, without them actually talking English.
It was pretty good
Make it longer and add more funny sounds, and then youll have a greaet movie. Your animation was awesome!!
Keep up the good work!
burtonearny responds:
Yeah, funny sounds are often half of the comedy (Family Guy is a good example of how funny sounds make a joke). Thanks for the animating compliment!
Decent
For the size it was, and the content it had, you can't really complain about it too much. It was a nice new style for you, and I think it could work. Obviously a longer version of this could expand the story somewhat and make it a bit more coherent, but this is an alright entry,
Sucks.
All it is is some guy accidentally breaking a watermelon.
burtonearny responds:
Wow, and you're a force to be reckoned with. It's more artistic than violent, or hilarious because it was intended more for an art website.