Amazing movie... is what I would have said...
You did so much good stuff in this! Great style- kinda anime, kinda action, choice "cinematography," great soundtrack.
Speaking of that, make sure you give the composer, which sounds like Thomas Newman to me, some credit in this movie's description on NG!!!
What brought this movie down was the voice synchronization. You managed to ruin a great and serious viewing experience with worse sync than old, badly dubbed Kung-Fu flicks. It was funny in a movie that wasn't supposed to be funny. That's why I gave humor a 1, and graphics a 4. Fix this stuff and you've got a masterpiece. Don't fix it and you'll never have a solid-enough presentation of your vision.