Reviews for The Adventures of Dagger

[Arcanil]

A Job Well Done

If this is your first submission, I look forward to seeing more flashes you produce.

Just a few points:

Could you put a little more detail into the houses next time? Even with the cartoony feel, they seemed to much like 'cardboard-cutouts'.

The rain in the background was good, but maybe change the sky a little? It seems a bit too grayish.

Last point and I'll shut up. While I have no idea why the guy before me wants THIEVES to have 'cool fighting styles', how about heightening the tension while Dagger creeps around? Suspense is just as good as fighting in the correct circumstances.

[AnimeNerd-Vash]

decent

no arms or legs? no idea Rayman was a thief. oh well. not bad first try. but the point of thieves is agility, quick-wit, and cool fighting styles.no plot either. keep trying.

[hahanotfunny]

constructive criticism

stop sucking

[NightTerrors]

stab...? stab...? stab...?

as was said before it does need more depth. but your animation isn't half bad. so you have a chance. ummm try having a story before you start animating. AND WHY THE HELL CANT I STAB ANYTHING!?!?!

~Z?~

[cantido]

needs depth

I couldn't sit through it. Watch some of the top 100 NG entries and learn from them.