Too quick.
Slow down the framerate.
Reviews for "Der Kurier EP #2"
wallpaperman responds:
no
Over waaaaaaay too quickly.
You did really well with your artistry and animation, it's impressive. Unfortunately, it falls into the category of a '10-second movie', which pulls it down below a score of two. You have two options, either slow the framereate down a bit, or add a plot and more scenes. It should be a great series if you can pull it off.
wallpaperman responds:
thanks for the ADVICE =)
short and pointless
you could have made it a little longer. all yo u did was have one guy go around and shoot people. woo hoo. how bout some non-japenease music or somthin.
wallpaperman responds:
you should have watched the first episode!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is by far horid
im sorry to say that i blinked and this movie was over i did happen to read the credits and it said voice acting...i didnt hear one voice all i heard was noises of people getting shot and hit ...it had no point i dont wnat to knwo the story and i hope a part three well we will see bout that tone down on the frame rate a bit adn again learn some more techniques to do the fihgt scenes but it was alright
mm... has potential.
well, to answer your question (wtf is frame rate?) frame rate is how fast you made the frames fly by. The frame rate on this is so high someone could have a siezure watching it. You might wanna slow it down, and add more frames to make it look like actual motion instead of an attempt to cause a siezure and kill someone. That, or at least add a siezure warning.