Its funny cos' its funny!!
Yeah manno, for a first submission this was purdy cool. Next time: backgrounds are nice, action is cool, and more beer. You can never go wrong with more beer, whether you are using to assist in your animation skills, in the animation or just random mentions of beer, you can never go wrong with beer. Did I mention beer yet??
Decent, but...
Overall it was just flat. The one drawing of the redneck was pretty good.. The lip synching was well done, as was the voice. It was just kind of boring.
I also don't understand how this was over 1mb.. I've watched animations with dozens of characters, backgrounds and voices before under 1mb. I mean, it doesn't matter to most of us because no one uses 56k anymore, but still..
I would like to see more from you in the future, I believe you have potential.. Just add more stuff.. Good job.
I'm not exaclty sure why that was 1meg. I went through all the steps of vocal optimization. I do have minimal flash knowledge, so there may be some steps i overlooked to reduce size. Thanks for the positive imput tho :)
needs work
heh, you sure can do a good hillbilly voice.
but i totally agree with Digital_Spawn, it was too simple. You need to put more work into this; like backgrounds, ANIMATION, and other things of the sort.
this wont get you anywhere unless you add some vital features to it. so next time, if you make another 'Rusty's Story', make sure you make it longer, funnier, and put in some animations, (sound effects?), backgrounds or scenery of somesort. Otherwise, its just too damn plain and simple.
overall score: 5/10
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Ok...
Ummm...it ned a background and some more characters, and a better story, but for a first atempt thats prety good....
Ok but not excellent
Firstly the graphics weren't bad, add a background, a story and understandable speech and this has a lot of potential.