Ummm
Your other preview was better, but really, come on, 2 previews? Just come out with the stinkin' movie already! And if it's too hard to make a whole one, just make a preview-length movie with a plot, that will be just as good.
And how come there's no movement? Animations are supposed to move around. And how come there's Matrix references in both of them? Why don't you use color? Why did you put huge long credits if it's only you working on the movie, and WAIT... it's not even a real movie! And why are you half-naked in your profile? Put some clothes on, we don't want to see your pasty white flesh!
-Ben Spurgin