Good peice.
I think it all flows nicely, no choppy transitions, it's just smooth.
Which I really enjoy hearing on a track, so yay you!
I think the song could use a bit more bass in my opinion. The hi-hats seem to overpower the bass, and we all know that is a no-no. D:<
Good luck with future submissions, I'll be checking in. :)
sweet
really nice, didt quite like the beginning though, it just took so long, but if anything else the beat was great, and again woot lovin the piano in the middle! that for me was the most beautifuL part and onwards~! edit the beginning this song is to awesome to leave hanging XD
5/5
9/10
Thanks :) I find the piano part also the best part of the song. Thanks for reaction :)
A little thin
You need a little more effects in it. Also, your drums dont seem to be working well (said that in another song too) especially the kick. Theres too much drop in it (don't know the actual term for it, but it seems like you can hear the pitch drop too much).
In the end though, you pulled it off decently.