Nice!
But why did you send it again??
Reviews for "The Orayu Blade : V2"
NuttyBanana responds:
its the final version. i uploaded a rough version before to get early feedback. i need feedback again and the old version wasnt really getting look at anymore. so the best thing to do was upload it as a different movie. :S
Heheh
Was kinda reminded of Genryu's blade, ne? You got the subway station, the new company assassin after the old one, swords coming out of palms in a flash of white light, and samurai-style one-hit-kills, where you deflect the opponent's strike and slice him/her immediately after. I think they're called Issen or sumthing in Onimusha. Anyways, was kinda nice, though the swords could've had more style. Ordinary katanas with plain red and blue hilts, kinda reminded me of lightsabers, y'know? And just FYI, if you don't know already, ninja swords aren't curved like the Samurai's, so if your aim was to make it ninja-styled (the way the guy holds hit, high-speed acrobatics, assassins...), there ya go. The 3d models were nice though, gives em a cel-shaded look, far better than most things 3d I've seen on NewGrounds. The 2d ones could've gotten more details though, they looked like they were drawn with a whiteboard marker. No offense aii?
NuttyBanana responds:
lol thanks....but there wasnt any train station in there....
Good
Nice but short battle scenes and transitions from sketch to 3-D are quite cool. Voice quality hampers its score
eh..
that was soem 3d animations u made there. It started to go bad when they started fighting, it turned to some cheap 2d graphics. And that bus part, couldn't you draw it yourself. This movie could have been better, but it looks like u gave up at the end, the beginning was good though.
much better
This is much better than your 1st submission, nice audio/video balance, all I can suggest is more "fleshy" and less "metallic" sounds in the hand to hand combat ( not the sword stuff, just the punching), overall is was a marked improvement. Being a musician I notice the soundtrack balance most of all and you balanced it nicely with the visual, bringing up the volume where needed to emphasize the scenes. Nice work.
Oh, btw, nice stomping of that last reviewer, although gays usually DO spell better with less typos they ARE hard to please, LOL.