Reviews for Weaponmaster pt. 2

[evildoommaster]

AcTuaLLy UsEfuL

dude, i couldnt read your text. I don't have flash but i do understand you shouldn'y type really small in green on the bottom of the screen for a half second. you could of easily put the text on the upper part of the screen in bigger font. Text is a good way to not do voices, only good with music in the background. But you forgot that you had a lot of wasted space on top in the sky. It would of been a better place to put the text in the top of the screen where ther was no action. OH, and don't be afraid to contrast colors and make it colorful and bright. - I hope that helps get you better votes

[Paperkut]

The Devil May Cry, Matrix and DBZ mutation

Wonderful, but would be better without that old Xiao Xiao cliché.

[ScarFather]

needs improvment

The fighting and shooting was good ,has alittler problems with it though . The guns look shity , and the text does go by fast. The fighting was good and there isn't a need for a story to enjoy it. You still have a way to go to perfection but you are close so hope you reach perfection next time.

[Ace20X6]

Pretty good.

Hey, I liked your flash man, it wasnt half bad. The only suggestion I have is too make the violence more realistic. You're a good flash author, but the little red circles for someone getting his head cleaved kinda made it less enjoyable. Keep it up.

[ChaosAllen]

Awesome Style

Somewhat like a fast paced, upbeat and prominently anime-like Madness. I love it. Looking forward to seeing the storyline.