You have the potential to be something great.
Don't listen to most of these asshats. I found the flash to be pretty decent. It's an original idea, and the animation flows very smoothly. the graphics are better than many of the things already on the site. However, I really saw no plot to the cartoon. Try to make a plot line: It would be nice to know what the hell is shooting at him and why. Hope I could help.
thanks you did help, considering i couldnt put this on the NG mag's ALPHA's place where it is supposed to be a certain length and i had to make it smaller but i needed to have a current flash portal entry(which i didnt) so i put it here. thanks too, workin on a story.
Looks good.
Like the last guy said; get some colors.
And a story.
And a conclusion =)
And for the record, one playbutton is sufficient.
pretty good
twas good
....well
i mean its like two seconds long, what do you excpect. Its ok, you are good.
God, please kill me...
That animation was just plain bad. I can create something better with my dick.
try it i'd love to see it