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Reviews for "West Life V.0.5"

Twitchy Fingers

Not a bad short. Few small things you might want to look at: Why are his fingers twitching like he's having spasms? No one could draw a gun with his hand all over the place. When he does draw the gun, he does so incorrectly, and then, like he's in slow motion. It takes several seconds, and we don't see the other guy do anything to counter. Except fall backwards before he's even hit. Was he trying to be like Neo? If so, he's not very good at it, despite the overused bullet time to help him see it coming.

Also, why did the loser's feet end up facing away from the winner, when we saw him fall bakwards. His head should have been facing us. The laughing at the end was kinda funny, but more meh. Meh i say! Which is also my final word on the movie as a whole. The animation itself (sans for the bullet time) is pretty good, but its flaws really bring it down.

yeah .. its ok!

I've seen both entries and i like the 2nd one more than the first coz this one is more realistic. In the 2nd the dead guy dies more beautiful.

Good and room for improvement!

I have watched both, this one is alittle better but like a review before, the guy who is shot, is facing the wrong way. We should be seeing his head. The other thing that is in both movies is your zoom in to the gun, It changes from a old west revolver to a shot that looks like a 9mm.

Keep working on your skills, you have potential.

Like the other reviewer said

some of the angle flaws are too obvious to ignore.

Think about angles. Ie the dead guy should have been facing the other way completely.

And when he draws his gun, his hand was the wrong way round.

I did like the style, if you plan more carefully you shall make great little film shorts.

Well played anyhow.

((( NEEDS MORE )))

This was ok, but needs lots of work, needs more of good feel of the content, you have a great start but needs more, maybe some backround effects and lots more detail, and downsize on the filesize for better optimazation (SP?) anyways better luck next time...

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