Pretty good
I liked it. The vocals were quite funny, obviously not having the greatest singing voice, this style suited ya. Very good. The guitar was pretty cool aswell. Just chords but didn't need to be anymore. There were a few off time moments but it's alright overall the song did what it needed to. Make you smile. Great job
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good song
the guitar was very well played, the lyrics were also good, bit funny too and stood out just as a love song should, could've done without the second vocalist, but maybe it doesn't sound as good without it, the abrupt ending suited the song and the solo was well placed, a great love song
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I was the only singer
haha that was well done
this was a well done song, the vocals were just at the right level. the part about her being a horse was funny.
she is a funny woman
thanks
Not a bad harmony
This tune is quite a nice love song, that expresses your feelings for Sarah in a slightly bizzare way.
I like the reference to the racial slurr and cliches. You've really worked hard on the lyrics - are you some sort of Wierd Al fan, perchance? I think that this would sound better with a little drums in the background, as this sounds like 3 voices singing to one acoustic and one electric guitar. Possibly throw a little bass in as well, but be careful not to overdo it.
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There is a bass in there in the second and last chorus.
Can't remember if it's in the second verse, might be.
Actually, I just slapped the lyrics together. I put no thought or effort into them.
But thank you very much.