XD Great!
Haha, I was reading your comment about the story and all, nice touch, and right when I got to the part where it reads, "... Wait till you hear the whistle... i think you'll like it...", and guess what? I did! Wonderful song!
XD Great!
Haha, I was reading your comment about the story and all, nice touch, and right when I got to the part where it reads, "... Wait till you hear the whistle... i think you'll like it...", and guess what? I did! Wonderful song!
Mwahaha
9 >:D no kill kitty D:
Anyways this is cool super happy.
yes repetitve but good repetitive.
Liked the use of the talking.
Good job :)
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Thanks for the review =D and yeah i figured the talking would go good... haha comes in handy sometimes :D i hate just stopping a song in the middle then starting it... so i had to add somethingggg
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cool
cute song, and the story in the comment is exactly how I pictured this song to be played to, I find if you picture what you feel to be going on it doesn't get repetitive if you don't picture it it does, so you could work on that and your ending needs something more than an abrupt drop off, the song is too good to end like that, great work
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Yeah i agree i think im gonna remix it a little bit and make sure i get my endings right... i didnt think this would score this good it was just something i was working on :D
SinZ
Sorry
10 - spelling of sight as site = 9
Sorry, I am a total spelling Nazi.
I shall however give a 5 out of 5
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A happy and cheerful song. Maybe a bit too unoriginal from time to time, but nevertheless a nice song. ;)
Anyway, that clapping sound you used is a bit annoying, as nearly every techno submission offers exact the same clapping sound... maybe you can change it to something different? ;)
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Actually i did and i also had it mastered by one of my friends =] If you want go to my profile and look for ... well its most recent submission §-LAFS RemiX-§ It has a different clap... better work ups... Pretty much just improved and also the sounds were switched up.. Thanks for the review!!!
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