Just a couple fries short of a happy meal.
I love the idea of an earthbound movie... there are just a few places where IMHO it falls short. The graphics outside need to look more like the game. There were also some things missing, such as dialogue between Ness and his mom, and also Ness and Pokey's Quest up the mountain (someone without eb knowledge would have no idea there were monsters). And last, some of the spelling was a bit off. Other than that, you have a great idea and can quite possibly make a name for yourself with this, with a little work, of course. ;)