My, you outdone yourself.
Wow, no words to express how well done this track was. The tempo was steady and calm and everything fitted in place. It felt like you were inside the music, already dancing to the beat, feeling everything throughout the song.
This seems to a different genre on you're part as well, this is always a great thing. You're experimenting which is always a plus side.
I have a lot of things to say, so I'll combine into parts.
Part 1: Beginning
Wow, I just loved everything about it, it started to build up very nicely and it came out really well. As new instruments started to get introduced it kept me glued to the wicked beats.
Part 2: Middle
Wow, here comes all the beats forming seamlessly into a melodic rhythm. This part was really great, I have so much too say about it, but I'll say it all in Part 4.
Part 3: End-Middle
Everything is starting to calm down now, the soft instruments playing in the background made this part powerful, I could really feel what you're trying to depict, I was impressed by this.
Part 4: End
Everything is ending, all the instruments started to fall silent, and it's over. Now that's 4+ minutes of music to my ears. Overall, throughout listening to the whole track, I wasn't disappointed at all. Even though you have said in you're description that this wasn't "mastered" well I'll just say this:
IT WAS STILL GREAT!
Thanks for the message about this, I really took my time in this review, I hope you enjoyed what I thought about it.
Take care.