I do like it, but...
I like how it builds to a crescendo. What I don't like is how audibly busy it sounds. There's alot happening here, and some instruments sound like they have to try a little harder to be heard. That said, the fanfare (trumpets, winds) work well with the oboes and key instruments. Maybe if some percussive instruments were added, they could keep a steady background for you. I don't know, I'm no composer nor maestro, but...