Gotta agree with Nubbinowns
Well... First of all, I'd like to agree with Nubbinowns... There is no climax... At all:S
You should've thrown in a 4/4 kick (I think that is what it's called:P) and a fat bass after the vocal part, that would've been cool^^
When that's said:
I really like the melodies. Doesn't matter if it's the rather clasic one with the piano in the beginning, or the one you made with your synth. They all seem good to me:)
It's a nice detail that you changed your synth melo alot. It keeps the song interesting!
Last but not least... The genre says it's techno, but the only thing in this song that has anything to do with techno is the synth:S
Oh well, can't think of anything else to say without writing too much-.-
Keep on mixin':)