Cool game, and update will make it even better
I liked playing this game so much that I *actually* finished it! I think I got all of the items, and had to refer to your mini-guide a few times (putting drugs in the water tank!?).
I really liked the general atmosphere that was kept in all the game areas. The all blended well, which is good, as many games I have played have some really nice places and a few crappy ones. This one was nice all the way through.
A few gripes I had were that the dialogue was pretty weak (you said that you weren't a very good writer, and it showed), the guy looked like he was taking a piss when his back was to you, and a few of the "puzzles" (such as the drugs one and the swapping cane, though the latter is probably me just not "picking up" on things) were strange, and it took me about 10 minutes to realize that I could go behind the ice cream place!
The Scud Missile place was amusing, but I hoped there would be more to do there. There was the hubcap (which, for some reason, I never used...along with the scissors) and the suicide bomber (which wasn't that funny becuase it's like 'oh here are batteries so you can go kill yourself and some innocent people'), and the counter guy, who was pretty funny.
All-in-all, a good game. The depth perception effects were marvelous, as were the drawings. The update will make it better, I'm sure, but for right now it does a darn fine job.
BTW: I gave it a fairly high music score becuase the background music was the kind that you hum without thinking, and I thought it was implemented into each area with "good taste"...or something...