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Reviews for "Short shorts #2"

yuck....waterbugs do have plenty of body juices!

Anyway man, there's realy not much to talk about...
I would have made it so that the pieces of the roach, God bless his soul, landed on the guys sandwich or something...

-Silencer

Beautiful

Loved just loved it, Thanks for using my clip for the credits. Stunning!

i know this is not you best wes

i thought the voices were cute but, it wuz a lil tooooo short, im sure this isnt your greatest one. to be honest, this is not good or bad. Damn it wes wut the hell were you thinking man.!!!jk
now where the fuck is shroomers 2!!

ok then???????

Good cartoon. its not funny, but confusingly funny!!!!!! OK then

Mikey! He Likes It!

Its a good animation overall. I can see the talent, that talent just needs to be molded as I can see that you are doing. Making more flashes will improve your experience and your technique. There were a couple of things that got under my skin. In my honest opinion, you need to do away with the automated tween animation for the title at the very beginning as it is fading away. It makes it look bad. Consider manually animating that title. Another thing is the sound (which may be intentional). I don't like the high screeches and opt for a more balance sound sample, but thats just me. If you can, try and get a really good sampling to start off with before you do too much editing to it, that way you shouldn't have to do _too_ much to it at all. Other than those little suggestions, its looking to be a great series of shorts.