You've improved...
You've improved a lot. The battles were pretty good and the story is probably one of the best for a CT movie. Just keep improving and you'll be making award winning movies in no time!
Reviews for "Chrono Trigger X 1"
Mystic-Skye responds:
thanks V, can't wait for part 14 :)
Other than...
the items pointed out by others, I would add the following note.
Your "thee/thou/thy" cases were incorrect.
Thy=your
Thou=you (when in subject)
and
Thee=you (when object of verb)
Fix that and those othre minor inconsistencies, and you've got yourself a movie!
Keep it up!
Mystic-Skye responds:
thanks
I did like this...
The stuff at the end was totally cool. The story started to take a crazy twist. For your first time, this was very good! A thing to keep in mind, is to time all of the text coming up, with how you'd read it out loud, and if it outlasts your reading it out loud, it's going too slow.
Mystic-Skye responds:
k thanks
practice more
ok sprites were decent, animation was half assed. Boost up your frame rate to 24 or 30 even, and make your sprites just a tad bigger, that will smoth out the animation itself. you had coding problems on your text as well, gave it a 7 on style cause Chrono Trigger rocks, but it wasnt original, which is ok dont worry about making up your own real story till you sharpen your ani skills. Sound was decent, but should have been better optimized its was muffled and the level seemed to low. There is your problems that need work, you have skill, just need practice:)
Mystic-Skye responds:
k thanks
pure crap
Let's see, bad spelling, crono never talks in the game, dumb pointless story, serge looks nothing like crono, Magus would never want to raise Lavos again, just a bad movie through and though
Mystic-Skye responds:
hey its my fuckin story my f#@3 movie so you dont have to watch it.