lol thats nice
i really cant give u a critique, its really really good. keep up the good work, your doing well.
lol thats nice
i really cant give u a critique, its really really good. keep up the good work, your doing well.
Very Good
Very Nice, I Applaud That
very good
Hey man, thats like my favorite song good job on that. and the story was good also.
Nice job
But the clouds were going the wrong way when the pelican was flying
Predicatble...
But funny as all hell!! Great work!!