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Reviews for "kissed a girl remix(demo)"

ROFL

I LIKED IT!!!1

zomgkerrie responds:

awww thanks!!!! i was having fun with it. just wanted to see if i was on the right track! thanks for the listen and review!! <3

Nice!

I must say, that was quite a different experience. It sounds great! You have a very interesting view when it comes to writing songs. Keep up the awesome work!!!

<PS>

zomgkerrie responds:

it's mah favorite penguin!!! thanks for taking the time to listen! yea i know this still needs a lot of work yet but i thought it was quite fun! i hope "interesting" is a good thing >.>

wow, that was quick

I like, but I didn't like the higher voice thing. It seems like you shrunk the audio file in FL Studio.

Some things to improve upon:

1) more instruments
2) vary your percussion
3) add a constant bassline in the chorus, that should help some things

to find the right notes, the cheaters way is to google the chords for the song. but with your pitch change, i don't know if you went up a complete octave or two, or you just raised the pitch to who knows what.

lol, yeah, I'm the guy who had that remix. Also, I've got two updates of it, so if you want to check it out, that'd be awesome. I should be submitting it in a few, so look for it on the AP new submissions.

Pretty good for a quick look.

Derrick

not bad.

Not sure if you listen to much Noisia, but it really seems you were going for the feeling they did with their bootleg of Sweet Dreams, what with the DnB feel and pitch raised vox. (One hell of an awesome mix btw, it's on their myspace.) It sounds like you were trying to make this a lot more agressive than it came out too. The finished product sounds a little on the empty side, but a fatter bass can really help that out. Overall it's a cool idea though, and you managed to take a song that I absolutely despise and make me hate it a bit less, so props to you. (Really though, I liked it, that wasn't a jab.)

In conclusion, good job, you just need to fatten up your tone a bit.

PS: My life is busy as all get up, sorry it took me so damn long to review this. I've been planning to write a decent one for a while now.

zomgkerrie responds:

hey! thanks so much for taking the time to review! i know i wanted the song much heavier. i just don't get the large chunks of time to sit and figure things out perfectly with a newborn baby.i was excited i was able to get what i did get done, done. i know it lacked a few things and i'm still in the process of trying to figure out FL so i can create what i hear in my head. i haven't heard of Noisa but will; have to check them out! with a baby, it may be a bit before i can sit down again and work on it but will let you know when i do. i'm glad i made the song a little less "kill-myself-in-the-face" for you, lol. thanks for the listen!!!!!