not bad
there were some hilarious parts in this (the llama looked funny, i dunno why) but some of the parts kinda sucked a little. i didnt get y u completely cut away from the plot to do sumthin about tekkin... oh well.. I still liked it, but i think i missed some parts.
This was a more personal flash. Matt wrote it and put in inside jokes along side jokes he thought people on the internet would get.
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awesome! sure the sound had moments where it was real loud and the dioloug was really quiet in comperison. just lower the volume of some of the music. the sound would have scored alot higher with proper volume. also check out Five Iron Frenzy and im sure the song is Oh Canada. its a good song and great for this animation... or part two. Also its cool that you used Hosers for the bases of this animation and didnt make them look utterly stupid.
keep up the good work!
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It's so funny that you mention that song, because it ALREADY in the second episode! As for the volume problem, your right, I should make the audio equal out.
Thanks for you review
Nice, but...
I thought it wasa the intro. but when i saw it was the whole thing it dropped 7 points.
I learned much from doing this animation, so I'm happy. The second half has better quality animation.
Drop the Gay Jokes
You don't have to be funny by saying you're a faggot or anything. Also make the plot roll out more smoothly, not with up and down all over the place. It was okay, make a remake.
Well, Matt wrote most of it, and he believed that it should be written for the humor of the internet. Personally, if I say "You’re a fag" to someone, I'm not commenting on their preference of sexual partner, but rather telling them that their pissing me off.
As for the story running smoother, when we sat down to do recordings, we said "Forget this, let's improv...” I believe that this is the reason the story and dialogue do not run smoothly.
I have no plans to remake the cartoon, as getting everyone together to do recordings is too much work.
Thanks for your review