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Reviews for "Nav - Lullaby Gone Awry"
Nav responds:
Thanks! :D
pretty good.
the intro wasn't very eye-catching or interesting, but ill trudge along :)
the beat as it comes up at the start needs some more variation! play around with the drums a bit. pitchshift, distort, make more complex patterns, throw them back. it just doesnt seem very involving right now, u kno? i mean, its a solid beat, but it doesnt hold u very long. maybe also use some rides and rimshots and stuff to that effect, too, given that these are pretty retro samples.
also, for the beat, the hats are a bit too off kilter for my liking--it makes it seem almost sloppy the way they are now, i say tone down the off-beat madness a bit so that it isnt quite as offbeat as it sounds right now. its just exaggerated a bit much.
for the synth that starts at :35, for at least the parts where there isnt a sub-bass, i'd like it if that was bassier [after that, well, it'd just muddy stuff up.]
after that, productionwise, everything seems fine to me, so good job :) its all mixed well and you got fine synths and fx and stuff [though maybe u can use some more background fx, but tahts jst random preference.]
in terms of the melody and progression of the song, it just seems like its rambling the whole time. like, it never gets to the note of the key its in or anything, so it just kind of feels like its going on... and going on... in a big question mark that never gets resolved. idk, i might jst be out of touch wtih the dnb scene, but thats how it struck me.
overall, its a good song, but i wouldnt call it something i'd idolize or anything lol. more or less, its well producd, but at the end, idk--i just didnt feel very satisfied, ya kno?
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i review you, so plz see my stuff too-its only fair :\
Ooh nice
I quite liked that song, but if ParagonX9 were to enter, he would probably win any contest he wanted. Maybe....
Great song anyway!
Nav responds:
Thanks! :)
i like
This is going to do well.
Sincerely,
Jealous of skills.
PS - no need to respond... just a shout out to a great piece.
Nav responds:
Thanks for the review!
I ALWAYS respond! ALWAYS!!! Even if I don't have anything good to say :P
haha wow.
I am also submitting something for this contest thing.. thought i should go check out the other submitions so far.
i really like that light synth it starts out with.
some of these little effects in this dong are really cool.
i hope my song can compete with this, this is really good >.<
Good luck.
check out my song some time?
Nav responds:
Thanks for the review! Sure, I'll take a look! :)