Potential is often greater than Performance
I can see you put some effort in to this. And its obvious that you know what you're doing in flash. However, the fact remains that your movie is a large one with little content. The idea of break dancing is neither original nor particularly entertaining. That being said, if you incorporated break dancing with something ELSE, the results could be awesome. :P I think the choice of music was very appropriate, and the animation style was nice and smooth. Just a bit too short and unoriginal to recieve a high grade. I hope to see some better work from you in the future! Good luck!