dont rush!!
id save this movie till your more familar with flash and have experimented on a few techniques. i made alot of 'does'nt do anything' movies (none of which will ever be uploaded) before i tryed anything with story... just trust your instict on what you think is good work and find your 'style'. try skipping a demo and just showoff a complete movie next time.
Does it looked rushed? If it does, say so, I've only had Flash for about 15 day now, so I'm really inexperienced at it, hence no loading scene at the front of the movie. I will definitely work on the movie alot, but rmember THIS IS NOT THE WHOLE MOVIE, it's the first 40 seconds, of about 10 minutes...maybe..(hopefully...haha!) Anyways, by the time I'm done with this movie, the beginning and end will look totally different probably, since I'll have learned more about Flash at the end, but I'm learning something new every day, and will most likely change this scene around a bit as well in the end.
Hmmm...
I would have prefered that you post the entire movie. If you aren't interested in the "negative" feedback you'll never get any feedback worth a damn.
How could I tell you what needs work by telling you it was wonderful, perfect, don't touch a thing and this is god-like?
But to respect your wishes - my feedback as follows.
1.art was good
2.sound was sync'ed
3. played OK on my system
Gee, hope that helps you lots...
What I mean by negative responses is stuff like - "You could have pulled better out of your ASS, dumass piece of blah blah...yadda yadda.." Criticism Is FINE...things that are wrong with the movie, by all means say!!.... Sorry for the misunderstanding :)