not bad
it was good could have been better but nice
Reviews for "Punishment"
Work on it
This idea shows some promise. You should put some more style into it, though. Make everything sleeker and not like it was all done in MSPaint. Add some sound effects and change that annoying music loop. And add something that can change the crosshairs on the screen from shooting monsters to moving to different rooms. It could be pretty good.
Ok....
This wasn't bad, especially for a first attempt at a Flash game, but there's a few things I think you could do to improve, for example:
1. Add different weapons. You made crates you can shoot open, maybe the new weapons could be inside them?
2. Add sound effects for your bullets. It would be nice to get some kind of sound effect when shooting stuff. Different effects for shooting different stuff would also be nice, for example one sound for shooting monsters, one for crates, one for walls etc.
3. Make enemies who are actually animated, as opposed to just moving around the screen. Work on animating the monsters' body parts and they'll look a lot better.
4. Add Some kind of health/armour power ups.
5. Generally work on your drawing and animation as a whole. Like I said, your work shows promise, and I feel that if you work on some of the things I've mentioned, as well as working to improve your art and animation in general, we could be seeing some really good flash from you in the not-too-distant future. Keep it up dude!
Great for a first flash
For a first time flash that was pretty good. The graphics were a bit "blah", but with better software you can make better graphics. And with more sounds, like gunfire noises, your flash will be much better. You show great potential. Keep it up.
first timer...
the good:
-great storyline, loved the concept!
-aliens taking over people's bodies, and little touches make this cool
-atmospheric; it had the thing/alien/futuristic vibe which worked.
the bad:
-after about 10 seconds, the music.
-difficulty curve: far too easy!! the bosses were also easier to hit than regular enemies.
-lack of sound effects.
everyone else has made the general improvement comments so i wont repeat, but if your storyline is that good i look forward to reviewing some of your films! better luck with the next game! ^_^