The graphics are good, but..
Nice job on all the 3d and stuff, but the voice acting horrible. No offence but it doesnt look like much effort was put into the voices. Get some more people to do voices with you and work some more on the sound and this would probably be the best on newgrounds.
Cool movie but....
the voice over timing is way off you should fix it. Gets very annoying to watch. But some of the best art ive seen nice work.
7.333
this type animation goes over well with many newgrounds users but there are plot flaws and needs a bit of improvement
not bad
man,the main graphics where not to good,the music either,and the general thing...but lets cut the negative crap give you the good crap,your special effects on the bullet scene where absolutely awesome,ive never seen such a good special effect on a flash before.im sure it would be long...but try to recreat that effect on your characters and backgrounds and im sure youd be in the top ten of newgrounds.ok graphics but the best bullet scen i ever saw.
Good, but could have been better.
While this may not be up to par with what Egoraptor and Andrew Dickman have posted here, but for what you have here is better than the stuff that Arrogancy, Tyler Gibb, and those motion comic authors have submitted. As for those complaining about the lip sync being off, consider watching this in low quality instead of watching the AVI file. With that out of the way...
Graphically, the artwork looks like Keiji Inafune's style and it looks better than Arrogancy's uninspired art. The character animation may be tweened, but you put them to good use along with flash gradients and 3D. However, when the bullets were fired out of the gun, they were still in their casings, which looks stupid. You need to pay attention to that because people will notice that like a really crappy paint job. Soundwise, you did a good job on the selection of music, even if it's just one song. However, the voice work is bad and really sullies what could have been front page material. Then there's the content, which is also a mixed bag. On one hand, you have a fight that moves at a good pace, and a bit of a story. On the other, there wasn't much of that story and the pace that it went could have been a bit quicker. Now, I know not everything needs to be like Stick Slayer, but slow pacing hurts story and character development. Plus, you might want to learn how to optimize your flash, because while 2.8 megabytes may be acceptable, something like this could have easily been one-and-a-half to two megabytes.
What I liked:
-Original
-Nice art style
-Good animation
-Clever use of 3D and gradients.
-Passable diologue and music selection.
-Good plot so far
What I didn't like:
-Bad voice acting
-Could have used more story development, but that's what sequels are for.
-Uneven pacing
Overall: Even though I liked this, it still needs a few improvements here and there. Here's an eight out of ten, and you might want to get Billy Cass (DragoonFenix15) back here if you continue with this series.