Hmm..
I do appreciate the effort given to this movie, I really do and I think you did a good job. But to be honest you should of aimed for a comedy instead of a drama with 8 - 16 bit graphics. Had you remade them and tried it I would of enjoyed it alot more, but seeing people slash two dimensionally at each other with dramatic music playing loses my interest within the first 20 seconds ^^;;.
But hey, you worked hard and good on it, so just keep the eye on the critiques and I'm sure you can go far. As they say! Try, try again. =D