ha ha
i liked it a lot.
i don't think the text moves too quickly. i think people just read too slowly.
Another good one, Nathaniel!
ha ha
i liked it a lot.
i don't think the text moves too quickly. i think people just read too slowly.
Another good one, Nathaniel!
heh, surprise ending
I enjoyed this, the surprise humor at the end made me laugh as well, nice going
a few pointers however, I would recomend coloring this, and giving some sort of backround to make it more pleaseing to the eye,
good choice of music
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TO MUCH DAMN READIN!!!!!!
Tips
I think this is the first time I've come across a Flash project that has a good solid story, but practically no animation. This toon seemed very uneven. Your writing is entertaining enough, but the lack of any real movement is what killed this piece. Learn a bit more about animation to bring it up to the speed of your writing and I'm sure you'll be producing some truly excellent work. Good luck!
Haha!
thats good, i like it. The story was funny, and the moral was hilarious. Plus the whole medieval speaking thing went over really well. I like this!