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Reviews for "The Sad Stick"

ha ha

i liked it a lot.

i don't think the text moves too quickly. i think people just read too slowly.

Another good one, Nathaniel!

heh, surprise ending

I enjoyed this, the surprise humor at the end made me laugh as well, nice going

a few pointers however, I would recomend coloring this, and giving some sort of backround to make it more pleaseing to the eye,

good choice of music

!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TO MUCH DAMN READIN!!!!!!

Tips

I think this is the first time I've come across a Flash project that has a good solid story, but practically no animation. This toon seemed very uneven. Your writing is entertaining enough, but the lack of any real movement is what killed this piece. Learn a bit more about animation to bring it up to the speed of your writing and I'm sure you'll be producing some truly excellent work. Good luck!

Haha!

thats good, i like it. The story was funny, and the moral was hilarious. Plus the whole medieval speaking thing went over really well. I like this!